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It Seems like im sinking
Faster every second
And its getting hard
To keep my head above the water

Theres times we use to talk
And laugh about nothing
Why do those days
Feel so far away?

And now it only seems
That you still hang on to dreams
And you have no faith
In this world we live in
And now it only seems
That you only confide in me
And the clocks stay still
But you keep on going.

When close my eyes
I can still sense you next to me
The feeling of joy
Is just a distant memory

And now it only seems
That you still hang on to dreams
And you have no faith
In this world we live in
And now it only seems
That you only confide in me
And the clocks stay still
But you keep on going.

I know, I know your finding hard to keep your grip
I know, I know this lifes taken it out of you
I know, I know

And now it only seems
That you still hang on to dreams
And you have no faith
In this world we live in
And now it only seems
That you only confide in me
And the clocks stay still
But you keep on going.

I know, I know this lifes taken it out of you
The Brand New Song For Black Rain.



I have only just finished writing it and i think its the best song to date.
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:iconunique-chiketa:
unique-chiketa Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2008   Digital Artist
its really good !
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LeniInChains Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2008
could you give me the chords please? it'd be so very nice of you! thanks in advance :)
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scarole Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007   Photographer
I'm completely in love with this song and these lyrics. Good job.
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thepunkrocker92 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2007
how do you put a book mark?
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Malleni Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2007
I really love it :aww:
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saint-freakish Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
I shit you not, this song has become and obsession after only one listen!!! I love it so much! Is there any way i can download it or your album cuz i cant download stuff off your purevolume and your album is sold out, which i would definitely buy if i could! anyway keep up the good work and i hope you go really far!
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crazd1misunderstood1 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2007   Writer
great lyrics
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Wolfspfoetchen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2007
i love the lyrics and the song :heart:
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willow09 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
This is actually very good.

:+fav:
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starlit-sky Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
beautiful lyrics:clap:
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flightless-angel Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
i love the lyrics and the music. :aww:
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Daiiara Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2006
I absolutely love this song! I was wondering if the ep is avaliable in Australia? <hopeful>
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panic-doll Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2006   Photographer
When close my eyes
I can still sense you next to me
The feeling of joy
Is just a distant memory


I identify myself with that part :)
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CrazyAssPunk Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2006
It really is an amazing song. I listened to it on Blackrain's Myspace account.
And lara's voice compliments it so well. And now it's the song on my myspace. Its beautiful.
Very inspiring.
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clickypenpixieXstock Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2006  Hobbyist Artist
:heart:
ive heard it, and it is amazing.
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amethyste Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2006   Photographer
i just love this song
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AnominusMidge Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thats really wicked :) :clap:well done me thinks it rocks like socks
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GrimmPingwynne Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2006  Professional General Artist
i like this one the most

x
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TeenageGrafiti Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2006
wow thats amazing!!
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sk8erpunkgurl Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2006
its nice ! hope u ll cum up wit more such songs or even better!
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viol-ette Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2006
beautiful song
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digli-chan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2006   Photographer
soooooooo good.. you're almost good as conor.. (almost.. lol)
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Vampirella666 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2006
really liek this part
"And now it only seems
That you still hang on to dreams
And you have no faith
In this world we live in
And now it only seems
That you only confide in me
And the clocks stay still
But you keep on going."

my only thing is that the first two stanzas/verses seem very cliche. but that's just my opinion. i hope you get what i mean. it's sort of an old idea and you didn't really add any new twist to is...
really nice piece though.

~Rayne
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BubbledMayhem Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
nice lines....

and nice music...beautiful concept

ill keep an eye with black rain....

why black rain btw?
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:iconmysh-dude:
mysh-dude Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006
whos the actual author? both of you or who?
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:iconemoant:
emoant Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
I write the songs.
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:iconmysh-dude:
mysh-dude Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
okay.

so you're a good writer then ;)
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Khrizthory Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006
just MouseOnit, and see the status bar, it was a "kinda cool" congratulations note...
But since you couldn't get it... nice writing emoant.
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twistedirony Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2006
WOW! that is all i can say. :headbang::clap:
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Khrizthory Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2006
i have bad news for you, somebody registered it and is claiming the author rights. You can see this in the following link:
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Suzage Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2006
Hahahaha!
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larafairie Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006  Professional Photographer
the link doesnt seem to work.
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TeenyVee616 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2006   Writer
As a songwriter, I have to say that this is really good, especially that line "and it's getting hard to keep my head above the water", that's really nice. :]
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snoangelbabe Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2006
great work. i'm sure it'll sound great!
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BuddiesBitch Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006
I think its sposed to be "When I close my eyes
Is that write?
Sorry I just thought you should know.

Good lyrics xxxx
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TheHauntress Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006
That's beautiful.
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obliteratus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006
Nice lyrics! What about the music? Has it been recorded yet? If so, give me a link! :p
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idilx2 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006   Photographer
give me a link to the song , will you =) ..
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happydeathangle Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006
thats awsome
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:iconhellemester:
hellemester Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006
"And now it only seems
That you still hang on to dreams"

I'm looking forward to this song :hug:
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reeed Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006
When close my eyes
I can still sense you next to me
The feeling of joy
Is just a distant memory

It's my fave part . . . .

Luv it . . .
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Kamigothic Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006  Student Interface Designer
so cool....:music::music:
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IdrilAsphodel Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2006  Student
i like the line "and it's getting hard to keep my head above water."
it flows together nicely. good job!
STNKY
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